After the night of
celebration, Weed left Morata along with Seoyoon and Alveron.
“From now on genuine
travel?”
He gathered as much
information as possible about the region he was heading to in advance.
He meticulously learned
the general direction and the paths he had to cross.
But food supply was the
one thing he needed the most at the moment.
“Let’s
see, how long will the food last?”
Shuffling
through his bag, the food supply that was always filled to more than a certain
size was frozen in one piece. Nowhere in that piece remained essential food.
At the Morata Festival, he
could only spend it all on villagers eating and drinking in large quanitites.
Fortunately, the alcohol
bottles were still there.
Before leaving the Yoroki
Mountains, he plucked and immersed the wild grapes in them!
Sitting there, it silently
ripened.
But Weed shook his head.
“Alcohol will not fill the
fullness factor.”
Alcohol
cannot fill one’s stomach. Of course,
you will get some degree of fullness, but there was a problem. As the
amount of alcohol rises beyond a certain point, decline in strength and
agility. In more severe cases, disabled in battle! In the worst case
scenario, you may die due to excessive drinking.
‘Still,
later on drinking just a
glass will be fine.’
In
life, alcohol is absolutely a useless
thing! However,
alcohol also had its advantages. In Royal Road, after getting attacked, it
doesn’t end with only just a temporary drop in life.
You
should give immediate treatment by rubbing herbs or potions and wrapping
bandages. Also, when there is swelling in the wounded area, it has the effect
of disinfection that will help prevent additional damage.
Furthermore, alcohol is
good medicine against the cold. When it’s cold, drinking about a cup of alcohol
will allow you to withstand the cold much better.
‘I can’t use this precious alcohol. Conceivably, when it matures quite
a bit, I’ll be able to receive money……..’
Leaving the wines in his bag
as they were, Weed went to obtain food.
Sarak.
Terose felt refreshed stepping
on pure white snow.
‘Finally the beginning of our
resurrection.’
The imposing Barbarian Warrior Pline’s
forehead frowned slightly.
“It’s
very cold here.”
Dane covering his face
with a robe spoke.
“It’s
fine. Fighting will warm you up quickly.”
Terose looked at his
colleagues that believed in him and followed him all the way here and nodded.
“We
must fight for sure.”
Scorpion
King’s Tomb Quest!
Due to that incident, the
Crimson Wing Guild disbanded, but the people that formed the core did not
leave.
Magma Witch Psyche and Light
Bearer Marker. Assault Captain Bastien. The elite of Crimson Wing Guild
hid their name, switched armors, and took part in Frozen Rose Guild’s
expedition.
From the beginning, the
last thing in the world they wanted was to mix in with another guild’s
expedition. Crimson
Wing tried to directly set up their own expedition group. But bad things happened all at once and the situation continued to worsen.
Guilds seceded from the alliance. As a result, the towns they held were
attacked from the front and because of the Scorpion King’s Tomb, they were
pressured with funding.
This
chain of bad events was enough to crash Crimson Wing from the top 10 guilds in Versailles Continent. As a
result, the guild inevitably had to disband. The heads remained till the end
defending it to the death, but the slowly crumbling guild was seen to not even
number in the tens of thousands.
‘But
we will rise once again.’
Terose wanted to regain his honor and revive Crimson Wing.
‘The place will be the
North.’
To reverse everything and
revive the guild, the expedition!
‘To return the continent
to normal is our responsibility that cannot be passed to anyone.’
Terose
smiled coldly.
The expedition led by
Frozen Rose Guild was still in trouble. They confidently brought a large number of people, but all kinds of
problems appeared one after another.
The expedition
brought a massive number cooks! Nothing went well in the early days of the expedition. To raise
the morale of the expedition crew, they made lots of food to give them. Eating
delicious food would bring up their spirits.
To Oberon and Drum, it
looked like they bought enough supples to not be overburdened. But the amount
of food ingredients used by the expedition was beyond
imagination. Those who had nothing much
to do in this cold place relieved stress by eating food the cooks made.
“Delicious.”
“Wherever you go you have
to eat good food.”
“Yeah. It was a good idea
to follow the expedition. There’s a reason Frozen Rose Guild is famous.”
The expedition gave their
thanks as they reasoned about the name of the guild.
Cooks also became
enthusiastic.
“People are eating the
delicious food we made.”
“Opportunity is knocking,
we must imprint on to them that the Cook Job is important.”
“Of
course! The ingredients aren’t even
ours so let’s use to our hearts’ content!”
The
cooks, due to the abundant food ingredients had peace of mind and instead of
what they usually created, they dared to develop novel fine cuisine.
“Matsutake
mushroom and crab dish!”
“Snail
in honey!”
Making
good food improved their cooking mastery even more. Therefore, the cooks spared no
expense in ingredients to make food. Since expeditione also gave a
positive reaction, they didn’t hesitate.
Ingredients were rapidly
consumed. At that time, at least those managing the supplies should’ve stopped
them.
But those responsible for managing supplies were completely relaxed.
“Well, we can get food materials
anytime we want.”
“Captain Oberon did order
us to raise morale so give them supplies in large quanities as they want.”
They did nothing even
though the food ingredients were decreasing very rapidly. When they realized
the remaing ingredients had been reduced to almost 30%, the mood finally
changed a bit.
“From now on, save a
little food before the main course.”
“Need to get food
ingredients.”
“Right now it will be
better to generously fill the inventory stock.”
Then the big problem occurred.
It was very difficult to obtain food ingredients in the cold North. In the mountains of the center of the
continent, chestnuts and acorns, fruits like apples were readily available, and
they could even hunt.
Even if there was a food
shortage that made their stamina decline or stiffen their movement, cases where
they died from starvation were quite rare. With money, it was possible to buy
food ingredients from passing travelers. But in the North, because of the cold
they couldn’t get fruit. It was also impossible to obtain food from travelers.
Inevitably, the only
option left was to hunt, but this was a formidable task. The monster infested
areas were limited. It was unreasonable to provide food for the many number of
personnel in the expedition through hunting. It could only be attributed to
them overlooking the importance of food.
As the food ingredients
rapidly decreased, the morale of expedition fell as well. Food
quality declined and
the situation of saving food to eat later came up. Not only did the quality of
food drop, they had to save as much food possible.
“I’m
hungry.”
“Please bring me something
to eat.”
The expedition wallowing
in hunger! If they started off poorly in the beginning instead of stopping in
the middle of eating well, in theory it would be much more difficult to go
hungry. Frozen Rose Guild took the initiative and starved themselves.
However, even in the midst
there were those that did not starve. They were not part of the elite Frozen
Rose Guild. There was no way the righteous and highly respected Oberon would
give them permission to eat their secretly packed food.
The
Geomchis! Geomchi 306 pulled out barley bread that had been hidden away in
his backpack and secretly chewed. Old, cold, hard and frozen bread, but as
saliva moistened it, he ate as it gently dissolved.
“No matter what, barley bread
tastes best.”
Ever since starving to
death, they decided to always have a plentiful amount to get ride of hunger. So
barley bread always generously went in their backpacks. Basically, in Royal
Road was an inseperable relationship between the Geomchis and barley bread.
However, a majority of the
expedition was forced to endure as they clutched their empty bellies. They
realized this fact at the end of such a failure.
‘Difficult to find food in
the North. Must conserve food ingredients as much as possible.’
Weed embarked on gathering food.
“Have to gather as many edible
things as possible.”
Since enough seasoning
remained, he just had to gather food ingredients.
“No
choice but to hunt.”
Weed
in the past thoroughly set the principle of local procurement. Apart from not
having to pay money, it was easy to obtain fresh gredients. Piling up food
ingredients for a long time in one place will just end up rotten and uneatable,
that’s law.
“Alveron,
let’s go!”
“Yes.”
Using Alveron like a subordinate,
Weed moved to the mountain behind Morata Village.
Woof
woof woof!
Aooooooo!
Usually
wandering like lost souls in the mountain behind Morata Village, Wolves! Their
wild instincts sparkled as they acted in packs eating animals nearby, however,
the Wolves trembled at the advent of Weed.
‘This wicked bastard......’
‘He’s looking at us as
food.’
‘He ate our parents. My
mother met her end at his hands, he didn’t even leave the leather. Woof woof.’
‘My brother got cooked
whole. He
has returned.’
Weed’s
high fighting spirit!
It had the effect of
decreasing morale of monsters similar to or lower than his level. In addition, Weed
hunted Wolves several times already. For monsters, Wolves have fairly high intellect
and excellent memory. Hunting and extracting the meat and bone, then stripping
off the leather for sewing, the Wolves did not forget the cruelty of Weed and
trembled in fear.
‘Still, we are wolves.’
‘To protect our pride.’
Woof
woof woof!
The Wolves rushed as a
pack while Weed lightly drew his sword.
“Moonlight Sculpting
Blade!”
The enhanced and definitive
version of Sculpting Blade! A sword of serene light. With a far longer range, Weed
brandished the sword of light and slaughtered the Wolves. Weed’s level could not be compared
to before, Wolves originally weren’t even considered as opponents.
“Slaughter!”
He separated bones, meat
and leather of the Wolves he caught on the spot.
Seoyoon simply watched.
Weed gently told her.
“Don’t
just stand there and watch, help me.”
Seoyoon didn’t say
anything. But through her eyes expressed the feeling of sorry was passed. She
felt sorry for Weed suffering alone in this cold weather, but if the Wolves did
not attack her first, she would not attack them. Weed shook his head.
‘This person can’t be
called an ally.’
Somehow
he needed to improve his position over Seoyun through power, because if she just folds her arms every time
there’s a fight, it won’t be helpful. The predicament was enough to put
pressure on him.
Like the saying being powerless
is a sin, Seoyoon’s fighting ability was far superior to Weed’s.
Weed was still struggling
in the early level 300s. In order to proceed with the quest, he inevitably had
to give life to sculptures so his levels hadn’t risen.
‘Wouldn’t
have made it through the quest if I didn’t grant life to sculptures.’
Though
he hunted hard in the recent months, because of this reason his level didn’t
rise. Still, while his level
went up and down, various skill masteries went up. Getting hit
by monsters whenever he had time also raised his toughness a lot.
Weed’s
method of faithfully raising stat and skill mastery built up substantial
foundation, so it wasn’t some unspeakable plight like no income at all. Stats
and skills certainly help when hunting monsters. But Weed surmised Seoyoon’s
level was at least in the late 300s.
‘Maybe
even over 400.’
Hermes
Guild’s Bad Ray unveiled his level at his coronation. Surprisingly, his level
was revealed to be no less than 412. In Royal
Road and on the Internet, there was a lot of excitement. Even when considering the amount
of time passed after his level was known to be in late 300s, his level up speed
was still fairly rapid.
‘Probably because the guild is
herding monsters for him. As the head of Hermes Guild, of course he’s receiving
benefits.’
Actively utilizing supplies and equipment, as well as collecting
information on hunting grounds. Blacksmiths crafted for him and Bards were
always on standby. In addition, in most of the battles Bad Ray would deliver
the finishing blow to the monsters. Receiving such strong support, it was no
surprise his fast leveling speed remained unchanged.
Originally, Bad Ray was a
famous gamer in other games. There are a lot of forces that would follow him.
In Continent of Magic, those who followed Bad Ray were very common.
Weed did not clash with Bad Ray because he was the
first to quit the game. Bad
Ray in Continent of Magic was one of the top 5 Warriors and his guild was the
strongest force there. According to an unconfirmed rumor, his actual fortune
was so enormous you could hear the sound of wealth.
The scene of Bad Ray
revealing his level at his coronation brought about a large topic in the Hall
of Fame. Not only that, all game broadcasters treated it as a major news issue.
Furthermore, the revenue of bars in Versailles Continent increased by more than
5 times.
“Bastard looks good at
whatever he does.”
“We slowly walk and he
just flies off the shelves quickly.”
“I’m still level 357. When
will I be over 400?”
Bitter soreness!
Crowds tried to resolve
their so called bitterness with alcohol. Immediately known up to the present,
Bad Ray recived all their attention. King of the Continent. Officially named
Emperor, he challenged for supremacy with with his ability apparent. Of course,
Hermes Guild’s scale and breadth of their forces had just as many enemies.
In the wide Versailles Continent, though not
as strong as Bad Ray, users with the level to restrain him numbered at least a
dozen people. There was also quite a lot of tension between Hermes and other
guilds. Single guilds capable of standing against Hermes were only 7, but when
considering guild alliances, more than 15 were able to deal with Hermes’
hegemony.
Although
not as desired, all users in Versailles Continent focused their attention on
Bad Ray. They all envied the strongest on the continent. Such was the person
Bad Ray.
‘Dark
Gamers Union revealed combat videos. Compared to the Mercenaries in the late
level 380s, Seoyoon was by far stronger. The monsters the Mercenaries took
quite a while to hunt, Seoyoon would murder in an instant.’
Depending on the method of
battle and the primary used skills according to the hunt, a speed difference
was bound to occur. But even when considering those points, Seoyoon was far
stronger than Weed himself.
‘Between a minimum of 390
to beyond 400. It probably won’t stray too far from that range.’
An
estimation made by Weed. Comparing combat abilities based on monsters would
probably not be wrong. Combat abilities rarely went counter to his eyes’
intuition. As such, he couldn’t force
Seoyoon to do this and that. He needed to make her into a companion who would
help him voluntarily.
‘It’ll be pathetic if I
get beaten by a girl!’
Weed
spoke in an insinuating tone passing through. Like a merchant selling
self-preservation food!
“You never ate Northern
Wolves before right?”
“......?”
“Actually, they’re so thin
they don’t have much meat. Their bones are uselessly strong too. But the taste is
incomparable. This is an absolutely true story!”
“......”
“Firmness
and longevity together in the meat. The pleasure of eating after carefully separating them
from the bone!”
Weed
reproduced the appearance
of tearing ribs with both hands. Truthfully, Wolf Galbi covered in spices was
the best. Weed licked his lips imitating the feeling of not being able to
forget the taste ever again. Weed added these final words.
“And the delicacy that
comes from immersing the bones later on. Drinking one sip of the piping hot broth in the cold is
just……..”
Seeuk.
Listening up to that
point, Seoyoon headed toward wolves with her sword unsheathed. Meaning to hunt.
Without a single flaw, clear eyes and white jade like skin, her beauty was only
really expressed in the morning dew.
After Seoyoon went out and
hunted Wolves, Weed extracted leather, meat and bones from the bodies of the
Wolves. With the proper division of labor, they could gather food ingredients
quickly.
“We can eat for long time
with this much.”
Weed smiled with
satisfaction as he looked at his bag full of Wolf meat. In the past, he had the
experience of feeding dozens of Paladins. The Paladins liberated from the
statues. To handle even 1 more growing mouth, he had to increase hunting. Through
it, he learned of locations where
you can gather lots of meat. That memory was helpful even now.
Weed didn’t gather Wolf
meat only.
“Cannot eat only one thing
for too long.”
You would be concerned
about loss of appetite as well as the dish effects. If you eat only food made
from the same ingredients, its efficiency will reduce until it dies.
Cooking Wolf meat dishes
was simple. You either boil or grill it. Eating Wolf meat dishes increases
health by 300 and increases strength and vitality by 20. It also has the
advantage of health regeneration 2% faster than usual and improved fighting
spirit.
But when eating only
similar foods, the cooking effects are reduced until it only gives the feeling
of fullness. At such times, other delicacies are needed to provoke the taste
buds.
“This way.”
Weed
took Seoyoon and Alveron and went beyond the mountain behind them. There was very broad ice path. The
land did not consist of soil and stone but of pure ice! Originally, this area
was a huge flowing river. However, due to the far too low temperature, thick
ice covered over it.
“Well
then, let’s go get something to eat.”
Weed
along with Seoyoon and Alveron walked to the center of the ice.
“…….?”
Seoyoon and Alveron were
both curious. Basically, food ingredients are bought at stores. It was usually
enough to buy from there. Few people had
become proficient enough in the Cooking skill to obtain ingredients from the
wild like Weed. In addition, the thick, frozen ice was devoid of any kind of
herbs or fruits. To make matters worse, there was not even 1 monster nearby. So
preparing food in a place like this sounded like nothing but nonsense.
Shuaaaaa!
Tremendous
winds were blowing.
Kuleuleuleu.
The
ground rang minutely.
‘What’s
this?’
Something
unknown. It wasn’t like earthquakes did not happen in Versailles Continent. But
the situation around seemed far too peaceful. The mountain they just came down from did not shake even the
slightest bit, gradually their bodies moved toward the minute sound.
‘No
way.’
After looking downward,
Seoyoon’s face became pale. Below the thick ice, rapids were flowing! A huge river was flowing
beneath the ice at a furious pace. Through the currents charging at the ground
of ice, the minute sound emerged. Seoyoon and Alveron were instinctively
engulfed by fear.
If it was just monsters,
they would not be afraid of dying. But if the ice breaks and they fall into the river below, they would
helplessly freeze to death.
‘Down below is going to be
incredibly colder.’
At their current location
was a sharp cold, the temperature of the river down below need not be said.
Seoyoon and Alveron were completely tense.
Gedeukdeukdeuk!
Weed
pulled out a sculpting nail and chisel, scratching the ice to draw a circle.
Then he pulled out a Blacksmith hammer and began ruthlessly slamming the
ground.
Every
time Weed slammed down the hammer, the ice rang. Blood drained from Seoyoon and
Alveron’s faces.
‘If
you want to commit suicide, do it alone.’
‘Goddess
Freya bless him. Grant me salvation.’
Then they heard Weed’s
muttering voice.
“Very solidly frozen and
not even cracked. Then with greater force……..”
At the end of this, a
tremendous fear surged upon Seoyoon and Alveron. Soon, Weed swung the hammer
with all his might. He accurately concentrated the force toward the center of
the circle he made.
Kuaaang!
Kuaaaaaang!
Every time Weed slammed
down the hammer, Seoyoon and Alveron felt faint. Goosebumps encroached all over
their bodies. After looking at each other and nodding, they located a safe
place and backed up. Meanwhile Weed swung the hammer several more times and the
ice finally broke off, making a round circle. Around the line made at the
beginning with the sculpting knife! A big hole formed there. A hole where the
cold river flowed through!
Weed
squatted down on the spot
and sat, pulling items from his bag one by one. A long fishing rod, pots and a
net capable of holding fish.
“Shall
I go catch some now?”
Weed
cast the fishing rod into the ice hole. Smelt fishing in the dead of winter.
Weed became proficient in the Fishing skill to the point he could procure food
to survive in this place. Through the cracked ice, the riverbed seemed
transparent. Inside the river, fish
were swimming energetically.
“Big
catch!”
Weed busily moved the fishing
rod.
-You have caught a 20cm
long Sweet Fish.
-You have caught a 22cm long
Pond Smelt.
-You have caught a 57cm
long Fresh Water Eel.
-You have caught a 1m 20cm
long Gold Fish. A catch that’ll remain in history of fishing!
-Fishing skill mastery has
risen.
-Luck rises by 1.
Unrivaled fishing spot! Catching completely defenseless fish.
Guys spirited enough to rise out of the tempestuous rapids! Above the ice
ground nearby Weed, was filled with fish splashing vigorously.
“Identify.”
Sweet Fish
A fish with thin and flat
body. Only lives in clear water. Dark blue color.
Can be caught in various
ways. Thrives in a fairly wide region.
Sweet fish is common, but people
can never forget the taste.
Food 3rd Rate Fish
Ingredient.
Pond Smelt
Body is thin and flat on
the side. Light fishy smell. Can be made into good sashimi.
Fish tastes best in
winter. Can
be cooked in a variety of ways.
Food 2nd Rate
Fish Ingredient.
Fresh
Water Eel
Eels are great for male
stamina! Common fish, but many people seek
it due to its effect and taste.
Usually caught during winter, but sometimes
there are odd ones.
Taking care of the many
bones is tricky, but incredibly delicious after seasoning and eating.
Food 2nd Rate Fish
Ingredient.
Gold
Fish
A
rare fish that shines with golden skin. Luck follows those who catch.
Inhabits
living and breathing nature. Likes cold places.
Enhances flavor of any dish, improves stamina by 1 and
helps with detoxification.
Taste in any cooking, and
increases vitality by 1 and helps with detoxification.
It is a rare fish that all
anglers want to catch at least once in their lifetime.
Food 1st Rate
Fish Ingredient.
Watching the lively and
fluttering fishes, Weed’s mouth was filled with a heartwarming smile. They couldn’t
be compared to rare Blacksmith or Sewing items, but still, in their own way,
the fish he caught were valuable. In the case of Gold Fish which permanently
raised stamina by 1, its value was indescribable.
The first fish Weed pulled
out he gutted and stored separately. The one advantage of the North was that
valuable food did not spoil because of the low temperature. Since it had a very
long shelf life, it was possible for him to collect food to his limits.
From time to time, he also
gathered dry branches separately for lighting a fire. Fire was needed not only for
cooking, but also for melting snow to make water. Snow was everywhere so he
filled the canteen with only a little bit of water and instead put the branches
in his bag. Fishing
learned for survival skills!
Eating
too little food for a long time, he learned the secret of survival. Weeds that
survived anywhere, Weed’s appreciation of such life was evident.
While
Weed was busy procuring food through fishing, Seoyoon and Alveron checked for
safety and slowly approached.
“........”
Seoyoon
and Alveron now had considerable interest in fishing. They slowly put the
fishing rods into the cold water and before long the caught fish emerged toward
their forearms. The act was quite marvelous, but the fish were also
considerably beautiful.
Priests
were generally opposed to death, but Alveron was a follower of the Goddess
Freya that believed in beauty and abundance! Like delicious and pretty things.
Alveron swallowed his saliva as he watched the fish.
Seoyun
stared down at the flapping fish with curious eyes. Seafood was quite expensive
in Versailles Continent. It was not that she didn’t have money, but she was not
deliberately picky with the food she ate. She had never experienced eating fish
in Royal Road.
Weed asked while wiping
the pot with white snow.
“If you’re hungry, I can
fix you something to eat?”
“........”
Seoyoon thought for a
moment and then nodded. She wasn’t that hungry, but she had expectations on
what kind of dish he would make.
“Then
wait for a bit. It’ll take some time.”
Weed
started a fire with the branches he collected in advance. Cooking over the
river, to prepare for the off chance of unknown danger, capable of blocking
heat, he took off the cape he was wearing and laid it on the ground.
Vampire
Cape!
Although
it did not have very good stats, it had the strong attribute of blocking fire
so he used it as a mat underneath the fire. The fire quickly became large. Weed hung a big pot over the fire
and poured in plenty of oil.
“........?”
To
cook fish dishes, would you take out a pot and use it that way, it was
incomprehensible. Instead boiling several ingredients to make fish stew, he
filled it to the brink with oil.
While
increasing the temperature of the oil in the pot, Weed eagerly prepared the
newly caught fresh pond smelt into sashimi. He extracted the meat from the bone
and after covering the meat with tempura powder, he placed them in the pot.
Jigeul
jigeul jigeul!
The
fish meat fried in oil turned yellow.
‘What kind of dish is that?’
Seoyoon
tilted her head.
The
food Weed wanted to make was none other than fish tempura. Fish tempura was not
common. Separating the meat into thin layers and then frying. All that remained
was the crunch and deliciousness. What was burdensome was you had to reduce the
tempura part as much as possible.
“Now,
let’s eat.”
Cooking
was completed quickly. Lightly frying thin meat so not much time was needed.
Seoyun carefully put the fish tempura into his mouth.
‘Delicious.
Really good.’
The
flavor of the light, crispy fried fish harmonized exquisitely. The freshness
was best when eating shortly after the fish is caught. In addition, there was
the atmosphere since it was outside where the cold wind blew.
Seoyoon
usually hated fried stuff. But this time, she ate as many as 8 until her
stomach was satisfied.
“……..”
Seoyun
blushed.
‘What
did I just do?’
It was so delicious that she ate without thinking.
Seoyoon stealthily glanced at Weed. But he did not say
anything.
‘Lucky.’
Weed
in his heart smiled with satisfaction.
‘She
enjoyed eating a bunch.’
Now
he felt more comfortable going around Seoyoon in the future. As long as he
cooks for her, she
wouldn’t attack him or kill him.
Body
and equipment equaling property, Weed was fearful of the bloody presence of a
killer. But there was a bonus. Seoyun would now aggressively do battle with
monsters. If she knows the taste of a monster that appears, she will hunt even
more thoroughly.
Feed
them well. Handle them well.
Suddenly, Seoyoon was being
treated similar to the Geomchis.
ahhh seoyoon ate my tempura!!!!
ReplyDeleteSuddenly, Seoyoon was being treated similar to the Geomchis... lol
ReplyDelete*tring
ReplyDeleteSeoyoon has increased in rank from scary to geomchis
Seoyoon is no longer considered scary and can now be handled
through the use of food like Geomchis
Skill learned "Pacify Seoyoon"
Allows the use of Seoyoon in combat
bad ray....?
ReplyDeleteBad Ray> Bard Ray
ReplyDeleteFirst stage of Seoyun brainwashing completed with the hunt of the wolves
ReplyDeleteSecond stage of Seoyun brainmashing completed with the fishing
Seoyun & Averon can't help but think that Weed is amazing...in a lot of ways
They are also amazing, like how they are scared on the ice and flee...to come back later for the food...
I was under the impression that Seoyun can't talk, like at all more or less. So was that stuff her internal monologue or something? Great chapter and thanks by the way.
ReplyDeleteit's not like she's can't talk, she just won't talk...
Deleteyes, it's her internal monologue
Her thoughts.
Deletesingle ' ' are used for thoughts in the novels
ReplyDeletedouble " " are used for speaking in the novels
One glaringly obvious correction is needed,
ReplyDelete"Seoyoon carefully put the fish tempura into his mouth."
It should say HER mouth. "His" would only be correct if she was feeding Weed or Alveron. Actually, that might lead to some interesting misunderstandings so you might as well leave it. lol
Other than that, Bard Ray or Ray Bard was already a mentioned correction.