Sculpture Transformation
Weed was slowly
walking through the village.
After he
successfully completed the quest, villagers stopped ignoring him.
“We respect
strong fighters. You need a lot of power to protect friends and family.”
“They say you
killed 5 Giant Ants? Incredible! I have something to be done, will you help me
when you’re free?”
Weed was getting
small requests from villagers and at the same time getting to know more about
the situation in the village. For example, the Village of Exiles didn’t have
any stores, and the villagers were buying things from each other.
‘Hmmm, I won’t be
able to do much trading around here.’
While exploring
the village, Weed noticed a crying boy. For some reason, he immediately thought
that it was Moss, mentioned by Cocoon. Especially since there weren’t that many
kids in the village.
“What happened?”
Weed approached
him and asked the boy, but he shook his head.
“You’re a
stranger. Strangers don’t need to know that.”
“...”
That was a very
cold reception. However, Weed was persistent. When you’re denied something, it
only makes you want it more!
“A lot of
monsters live around this village. I heard there are even shape-shifting
monsters, maybe you got hurt by one of them?”
After hearing
about the monsters, the boy immediately raised his head. Tears on his face went
dry, and his eyes shone with hatred.
“Have you ever
hunted shape-shifting monsters before?”
“Of course. I
hunted many monsters.”
“Then help us.
Those monsters... those damn monsters are after my sister.”
Weed felt that
there was definitely a quest associated with this conversation.
“Tell me more
about what happened.”
“Actually...”
The boy vividly
told about his problem.
The monsters that
were attacking the village saw his sister Amy. The Doppelganger that led them
fell in love with her at first sight.
“I like you
human! I will feed you as much as you want if you come with me!”
The leader of the
Doppelgangers was inviting Amy to his lair but she was persistent in her
rejection. She didn’t want to leave her older brother Moss.
Then Doppelganger
turned into her brother Moss, copying his face and body, becoming his perfect
copy.
“Will this do?
Will you come with me now?”
“To live with a
monster, whose original form is long since forgotten? I'd rather bite off my
tongue and die!”
Amy threatened to
end her life and Doppelganger reluctantly retreated.
He liked her a lot.
And in the Plains of Despair, monsters usually got what they wanted.
“Fine, human. I
can wait. I'll give you 3 years, after that I will take you with me! And if you
refuse then, I’ll slay every person in this village.”
The time given by
the Doppelganger was running out in 3 months.
Moss was pleading
with tears in his eyes.
“Please don’t let
them take my sister. I don’t have anything to give you, but please help me.
Those Doppelgangers live in the woods to the north.”
Ttiring!
Doppelganger
covets a village beauty.
Monsters think of
humans as things. The leader of Doppelgangers likes the girl Amy. Kill him so
she doesn’t get taken away!
Difficulty: C.
Reward: Unknown.
Conditions: Moss
and Amy must survive.
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‘That means I’ll
fight shape-shifting Doppelgangers soon.’
Usually Weed
would just refuse this quest. The reward was unknown and Doppelgangers were
very unpleasant opponents. They use magic and often can do something completely
unexpected.
However, the
boy’s tears reminded Weed of his past.
When his parents
died, he was left only with his grandmother and his younger sister. It seemed
like the world had ended back then. He had no one to rely on. He wanted some
support but there was no one to provide it.
That’s why he
understood Moss’s feeling very well. If he had someone to ask for help back
then only to get rejected his life would be ruined completely.
Weed
nodded and replied:
“I’ll protect Amy
for sure.”
| You accepted the quest. |
“Thank you,
stranger!”
Moss smiled for
the first time since they met.
***
Weed left the
village and headed towards the hideout.
From their
peaceful kingdom, brave warriors of Rosenheim got right into the middle of
Plains of Despair.
And in their first
battle, they had to fight Giant Ants! To survive they had to give it their all.
They won in that battle, kept their lives and as a reward all of them got 2-3
levels.
Soldiers’ faith
in Weed was absolute.
“Commander! Where
are we going now?”
“The innocent
people of nearby village are being harassed by a Doppelganger, it threatens
them and wants to take a beautiful girl Amy from her older brother Moss.”
“We must stop
them.” - replied Hosram in a firm voice.
The Royal Knights
were touched by the story too.
“It is knight’s
duty to protect weak, we will follow you.”
“I can’t tolerate
that a young girl is suffering from an evil monster.”
“Please take us
with you, we will definitely stop Doppelganger.”
The small army
headed to the northern woods, where the Doppelganger lived. Sunlight couldn’t
penetrate the thick canopy of trees to dispel the darkness below. Many
dangerous monsters inhabited these woods and sometime ghastly sounds could be
heard.
“The earth is
tainted.”
“This forest is
cursed.”
The priests’
warnings didn’t stop Weed.
“Summon Death
Knight!”
Death Knight Van
Hawk remained in front of the troops.
“Oh, a familiar
place.”
The Death Knight walked
valiantly.
And shortly after
they discovered the Doppelganger. They could tell it was the Doppelganger
because it had the same appearance as the boy Moss. Weed and the soldiers
eagerly attacked the Doppelganger.
During the fight,
the Doppelganger changed his form a few times. By alternating the skills used against
the soldiers, Royal Knights and Van Hawk, it endured. The variety of skills it
used was enough to cause confusion, but thanks to the combination of Weed and the
Death Knight along with the Priests’ healing, the soldiers were able to win.
Weed and the
soldiers eagerly took on quests.
All kinds of
monsters emerged around the Village of Exiles. Giant Ants, Doppelgangers and so
on, usually discovering the monsters at the start was the hardest part. The missions
asked of them involved killing bizarre plants, animals and flame monsters
within caves.
“Commander, we’ll
serve under you!”
“Commander, we’ll
follow you anywhere!”
Weed seduced the
soldiers! In fact, the power of the soldiers did not help much early on. The reason
being they were too weak. However, while hunting strong monsters one by one,
they were getting stronger at a very fact pace. The mastery of the Royal
Knights rose and the pincer movement with the Priests was done smoothly.
The army’s morale
changed dramatically. At first, the soldiers didn’t trust in Weed much and
weren’t providing much help as they were weak. But time was passing and the
more they hunted the stronger they became. Weed in the central role was sweating
due to the light. Hunting the large monsters around and sweeping through the
quests was Weed!
There were plenty
of perilous moments, but Weed successfully resolved the quest and went on. And
then the experience climbed at a very fast rate. When hunting just one of the
monsters, a certain amount of experience and items will drop. But when you receive
a hunting quest, in addition to when you catch the monsters, the quest
experience rewards were very savory. The experience they received was
practically 3 times as much as they would receive in Rosenheim Kingdom.
‘I guess because
it’s somewhat dangerous.’
However, the drawback
to the quests was the poor quality of things received.
In areas with
poorly developed technology, all the produced items were of poor quality.
That’s why when Weed was receiving weapons as reward he was giving it to Royal
Knights or soldiers.
“Thanks Commander.”
“I’ll be sure to use
it well.”
Every time Weed gave
away some item, he was crying inside. It was very hard to take the item you
gave to NPC back without your intimacy declining sharply.
‘Inevitable
but...’
After hunting in
the Plains of Despair he reached level 279. Even the soldiers rose their levels
significantly, the Royal Knights and Priests were also quite strong. However,
with the Orcs and Dark Elves as the opponent, they were woefully lacking.
***
Orcs!
The word Orc
immediately brought a few images to mind. Greedy and tenacious race. With
strong obsession they were vengeful opponents. Quickly multiplying like
cockroaches and good at fighting. The Orcs were at least in the thousands,
maybe even the tens of thousands!
“Urgh!”
Back in the cave
Weed groaned helplessly. The hunt around the village was going well, but how
was he supposed to defeat armies of Orcs, Dark Elves and Necromancers?
His subordinates
were at best 4 Centurions, 400 soldiers and 10 Royal Knights. Of course he had
50 Priests, but their power was only helpful when supporting the fighting
troops to some extent.
After a number of
runs, the usefulness of the Royal Knight could be considered similar to Freya’s
Paladins to some extent. Going right up the Yuroki Mountains with just this
amount of power, they are bound to surely die. They will die at the hands of
the Orcs before even meeting the Necromancers.
Enemies on all
sides.
Orcs and
Necromancers were definitely enemies!
But the Dark Elves
were allied with the Necromancers.
Weed was thinking
hard. Usually he was very sharp and knew well when to flatter or keep silent to
earn more money, but now he was struggling to find any solution to this
situation.
‘The enemies are
strong but they’re not exactly close to each other.’
Finally in Weed’s
head from a fiction book he read at some unknown time in childhood a sentence emerged.
The enemy of my
enemy is my friend!
The moment he
recalled that sentence, it seemed like the fog in his mind started to clear.
Like a bright ray of light appeared in the darkness of hopelessness.
Weed wasn’t that
much into complicated novels. The more complex the book was the harder his head
ached after reading it. Therefore he liked simple, clear, cheerful stories,
which he mainly read. Fantasy, adventures and comics!
‘Books never
lie.’
The next idea
that came to his head he encountered in comics a few times. And if he combines
it with his sculpture mastery it could lead to something interesting.
‘Won’t hurt to
just try.’
Weed left the
cave and started looking for a big stone. There were a lot of stones around but
he needed one of a certain size.
‘Not this one, I
need one higher than me.’
Finally he found
a stone about 3 meters high.
Zahab’s Carving
Knife moved quickly cutting through the rock.
Gradually an odd
shape started to appear from the stone. It was neither Seoyoon, who was the
usual motive of Weed’s works, nor some object. It was a creature alive and
moving. Warlike and greedy species.
Orc!
However, while
working on the sculpture, Weed became plunged in distress.
‘Orcs are greedy.
But I mean, I don’t understand the greed. Greedy for what? Peaceful and
beautiful world, I have no idea on the activities and excessive obsession of
selfish and greedy creatures.’
For a perfect
sculpture, it is very important to understand the target. Weed did not know how
the heck to understand Orcs.
It was surely not
going to be easy to understand Orcs more than humans. The created statue was
made in the form of a modest Orc. It was roughly the shape of an exemplary Orc.
While sculpting various monsters, he had never sculpted an Orc, so as much as
possible he faithfully resurrected the memories of time.
Unassuming and
ordinary statue. Somewhat docile and awkward Orc was being created. Then one moment
that happened some time ago suddenly emerged. The big incident where a whopping
5 gold had been blown to obtain a shield for Cocoon. Back then there was no
other way, but still. At that time he was expecting to receive a reward for the
quest. But when he actually completed the quest, all he gained was from Cocoon
was a story, a few words and a knife. He entered 5 gold and failed to even get
1 copper back. He seemed to fall over in regret.
Money! Money! Money! Money! Money!
Obsession over 5
lost gold! Greed! Obsession! Desire! Grudge!
"Euaaaa!"
Weed moved the
carving knife brilliantly. The statue became filled with life. Selfish wrinkles
under the eyes, gaping mouth ready to devour and a pig nose filled with desire.
‘Preferably a
little stronger, show significant muscle, add scar marks to make him more
life-like!’
‘I think I’ll
make his muscles bigger so he looks tougher and add scar marks so he’s more
life-like!’
Perfect combat
type Orc statue.
As special image
settings, he made the teeth large and thick. And then a larger size and
grotesque nose, eyes filled with selfishness, the Orc statue was born. A face
that even kept the devil away, it was hard to keep your eyes open and the body
covered with muscles was at least twice as great as a normal Orc.
Fine Piece! You
completed the Monster Orc statue!
An artist with
normal sense would absolutely fail to create such a statue. Completed with
excellent dexterity, but it seems it would be better to put it in storage without
having it see the light of day.
Artistic value:
1.
Special Effects:
Gazing at the Orc statue will increase health and mana regeneration by 5% for a
day.
Movement speed increased by 15%.
Intellect decreased by 10.
Charm decreased by 200.
Strength increased by 20.
Agility increased by 10.
Charisma increased by 60.
Leadership increased by 50.
Can stop the crying of a crying child.
Those with low courage, just by looking at
the Orc statue will become severely atrophic.
Effects don’t
stack with other sculptures.
Until now
completed number of Fine Pieces: 6.
-Mastery of Sculpting
skill has risen.
-Fame increased
by 46.
-Fighting Spirit
increased by 1.
-Endurance increased
by 3
-Charisma
increased by 3.
-Patience
increased by 5.
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The Orc statue
was completed. The low artistic value bothered him a little, but Weed regarded
it fortunate that it wasn’t an abomination. Even though he created it, he
feared such a dreadful Orc would emerge in his dreams. Looking at the statue
head on, regardless of the reason, he wanted to smash it! He wanted to shatter
it with Destruction Sculpture on the spot!
‘But I painstakingly
created it, so it’s like my child...’
Weed’s heart was
captivated. However, even with affection, he would have to adapt as much as
possible to the damn statue.
Weed instead of
using Destruction Sculpture cast another skill. The first use of Daron’s sculpture
skill! The secret art!
“Sculpture Transformation!”
| You have used Sculpture Transformation. |
The sculpture
skill that uses boundless affection to make the sculptor resemble the sculpture.
Weed’s appearance
gradually changed.
His height increasingly
grew and rugged muscles were created. Hair grew covering his entire body, and then
after a while, his appearance completely into an Orc. Even the back of his
hands and the inside of his feet was completely Orc. Height obstinately grew,
changing his eye level. The thickness of the limbs was different and he gained
a plentiful belly.
“Successful?
Chwiik!”
Until now he was
able to speak normally. But now the exclusive property of Orcs, the chwiik
sound emerged.
“This, chwiiik.
Strange. Chwichichichiik!”
Weed tried to keep
his mouth shut but his teeth were too large to close it.
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Body type has
changed, many of the worn equipment are unable to be used.
After the reverse
transformation you will be able to equip it again.
Whole body can
wear iron armor or heavy clothing.
Depending on the
type of species, new equipment must be obtained.
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Due to Sculpture Transformation, strength and agility slightly increase.
Intellect and
wisdom will fall to the lowest level.
Art stat is reduced
by half.
Charisma rises
significantly.
Will remain valid
until Sculpture Transformation is released.
|
He confirmed
through the character window. Strength, agility and vitality increased, whereas
other stats reduced slightly. The blow was especially great in art and wisdom.
In addition, with the exception of his sword and cape, all his armor and gloves
could not be worn.
“In transformed
state, choeik! I won’t be able to use? Chwiiii!”
The race itself
was different so it couldn’t be helped. Trudge. Weed unfamiliar with his steps
climbed the Yuroki Mountains filled with Orcs. He walked with steps like a
waddling duck, but with his great height, he was immediately able to climb the
mountain.
haha as good as usual and in time this time :)
ReplyDeleteActually one day late >.<
DeleteMean people from chat make me read weird stuff instead of doing my job D8
<So sorry i will have to stop talking to you then
Deleteand this week was at least more in time than last weeks chapter.
it never goes new quest, its just a Ting! like a system alert message
ReplyDelete“I summon you, Death Knight!”
ReplyDeleteThe summoned Van Hawk was sent ahead to scout.
“Oh, a familiar place...”
The Death Knight vigorously went forward. Weed and his army followed.
Soon they found the Doppelgangers’ lair. Weed understood that they came to the right place when someone looking like Moss stood on their way. Therefore they attacked without a word.
During the fight, the Doppelganger changed his form a few times, becoming a wolf or an unknown creature with multiple tentacles. Even simultaneous attacks of many warriors failed to kill the leader of Doppelgangers. He was dodging most of attacks and dealing terrible blows in return. If not for the priests, Weed would lose part of his army in this battle.
change to:
“Summon Death Knight!”
Death Knight Van Hawk remained in front of the troops.
“Oh, a familiar place.”
The Death Knight walked valiantly.
And shortly after they discovered the Doppelganger. They could tell it was the Doppelganger because it had the same appearance as the boy Moss. Weed and the soldiers eagerly attacked the Doppelganger.
During the fight, the Doppelganger changed his form a few times. By alternating the skills used against the soldiers, Royal Knights and Van Hawk, it endured. They variety of skills it used was enough to cause confusion, but thanks to the combination of Weed and the Death Knight along with the Priests’ healing, the soldiers were able to win.
The text you suggested is more awkward and contains its own spelling and gramatical erros. IcedLance should leave it as it is.
DeleteAn example of an obvious error you made is: "They" variety of skills
Bonky's fixes do tend to sound awkward (they need its own proofreader), but they're closer to the original text. This chapter's russian translation was especially loose.
DeleteTo Bonky:
if you gonna check the rest of this chapter, visit here: http://goo.gl/hSyWM
This is the early copy of my translation, but in there i marked some places that are not translated or translated really weird in russian. (maybe not all of them though)
when i read "I summon you, Death Knight" i thought of Ash Catchem calling his pokemon.
Deleteif there are spelling errors so be it, but it wouldnt sound awkward to a native english speaker, anyway ill edit it later, after that post what things are awkward and what the new version should be, ive easily found more than 20 missing lines, i check it with the raws, so the context isnt wrong
ReplyDeleteAbout awkwardness:
DeleteDeath Knight Van Hawk remained in front of the troops.
...
The Death Knight walked valiantly.
Remained? really? he wasn't even summoned before. Totally not remained.
Walked valiantly? somewhat pompous but okay. Tho i'd use bravely, but that's not the problem. Walked where exactly? in cirkles? To the nearest hotdog stand? I believe that the russian translation at least was clear here with DK walking In Front of the 'army'.
Cmon Bonky, u can do better!
Hahaha "chwiik!" XD
ReplyDeleteThank you for the chapter!
His Charisma rises? is this correct i would think that becoming an ugly and scary orc it would lower.
ReplyDeleteOr is the charisma stat affected by intimidation?
charisma is like the ability to attract people or inspire devotion or something, i would think it to be sort of the presence of leader, fear works pretty well if you think about, at least i cant come up with a better method
ReplyDeleteHe's just very handsome in orcish sense of manly beauty. W8 for next chapter.
ReplyDeleteAlso I'm pretty sure the chapter name is sculptural transformation, like the name of his skill, not a shape shifter sculpture, thats just weird and random.
it never translated to transformation, it just didnt
ReplyDeleteOkay.
DeleteIs it a sculpture of a shapeshifter? No.
Is the sculpture shapeshifts? Also no.
Just why! Why did you do that? You could as well call it "Jogag Byeonsinsul". Would make as much sense, maybe even more actually.
About missed sentences: There're a lot. I gave you a link somewhere above (http://goo.gl/hSyWM) there some lines that I found are marked. And a couple places that're Significantly different from source.
ReplyDeleteAlso it's not some math or physics, it won't blow up in your face if you deviate a little.
A good translation is just a very detailed retelling.
i apologize, you were right and i was wrong, i never translated the byeonsinsul part so i just used the commonly used shape shifter cause no1 ever translated it correctly to transformation
ReplyDeleteCorrections(in parentheses):
ReplyDelete**Note, this is from top to bottom so when using ctrl+f it should be the first result after the last sentence's location.**
1)After he successfully completed the quest, villagers stopped ignoring him. --> After successfully complet(ing) the quest, (the) villagers stopped ignoring him. OR (Having) successfully completed the quest, (the) villagers stopped ignoring him.
2)the Village of Exiles didn’t have any stores, and the villagers were buying things from each other. --> (since) the Village of Exiles didn’t have any stores, (so) the villagers (bought) things from each other.
3)Of course. I hunted many monsters. --> Of course. I (have OR I've) hunted many monsters (before).
4)Then Doppelganger turned into her brother Moss, copying his face and body, becoming his perfect copy. --> Then (the) Doppelganger turned into her brother Moss, copying his face and body, becoming his perfect copy. OR (In response the) Doppelganger turned into her brother Moss, copying his face and body, becoming his perfect copy. *note: I don't think the being's name is actually Doppelganger, and in accordance to this assumption it would mean that the word is the name of the species so any mention of Doppelganger and it's actions should(for the most part) have "the Doppelganger instead of just "Doppelganger"*
5)Moss smiled for the first time since they met. --> Moss smiled for the first time since their (meeting).
6)Soldiers’ faith in Weed was absolute. --> (The) soldiers’ faith in Weed was absolute.
7)Weed seduced the soldiers! --lol--> Weed (had) seduced the soldiers!
8)At first, the soldiers didn’t trust in Weed much and weren’t providing much help as they were weak --> At first, the soldiers didn’t trust in (OR hadn't trusted) Weed much and (didn't) provid(e) much help as(OR since OR because) they were weak
9)When hunting just one of the monsters, a certain amount of experience and items will drop. --> When hunting just one of the monsters, a certain amount of experience and items (would drop OR were dropped).
10)‘I guess because it’s somewhat dangerous.’ --> (")I guess (that's) because it’s somewhat dangerous.(")
TO BE CONTINUED...
CONTINUATION..:
ReplyDelete11)With strong obsession they were vengeful opponents. --> With strong obsession(s) they were vengeful opponents.
12)They will die at the hands of the Orcs before even meeting the Necromancers. --> They (would) die at the hands of the Orcs before even meeting the Necromancers.
13)Weed wasn’t that much into complicated novels. The more complex the book was the harder his head ached after reading it. --> Weed wasn’t that (into OR interested in) complicated novels. The more complex the book the harder his head ached after reading it.(no "was")
14)Until now he was able to speak normally. --> Until now he (had been) able to speak normally.
I know there were more corrections that are needed for a better read that I overlooked but I couldn't think of a correction for them (in most cases) or didn't notice them(forgive me).
I loved the chapter, thank you THANK YOU for translating it!!! Superb!