[FanFic] Road to Legend [by Verelios]

 A young man finding peace in an online game, called Royal Road. No man is an island unto himself and so he searches within the vast MMORPG for a place he can belong and friends to call his own. 

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6 comments:

  1. Okay this looks interesting... funny but intellectually satisfying.

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  2. Is this going to be regularly added to or die out within a few chapters like most of the other fanfics? However on a lighter note this is while not yet entering royal road quite an interesting and in depth fanfic so thank you for what you have done thus far.

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  3. I found it quite good.
    Many thanks, looking forward to more

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  4. cool..
    a new update..
    tnx..

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  5. Very well written with educated vocabulary and development. You incorporate wit and allusions well. In the prologue, the comparison of the broken-faced kid to a rag-doll was extremely vivid and effective. I think one major flaw, however, is that the protagonist is hard to empathize with.
    First, his name is quite strange and it forces the reader to put forth effort whenever they visualize him. Rather than something iconic like Luke Skywalker, we have Verelios Eroias. How do you even pronounce that? While it may pass in a fantasy setting, the story takes place on Earth before diving into Royal Road. Thus, he should have a name indicative of his birthplace.
    Second, the protagonist has an ambiguous character, born from conflicting descriptions. He has an iconic "special weapon"--like the lightsaber--in this case, his strength and ge describes himself as a Buddha, yet when he gets home he acts like a desperate-for-a-girlfriend-teenager when he asks his dad if he mentions him and brings up his not-so-perfect grades. He only has 4 contacts, 0 outside of family, on his phone symbolic of a introvert who is uninterested in friendships. His dad considers him a misanthrope but the protagonist has his wit which he uses to defeat his dad in an argument in chapter one. What is the main character? A bodhisattva, a teenager with interest in girls, an recluse, misanthrope, or a philosopher?
    Nevertheless, there is no doubt this is a fine piece. I just feel that there are a few flaws that detract from the work as a whole.

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  6. i also find it a very good novel but it seems to go away from royalroad(more you read it,less the heros seems to be in a virtual game ,more in the fantasy novel exemple there is not a lot of scene where veres level up we don t know his level or the level of his skills ,he never died and death seems permanent in this novel).but the story is very good,veres and ruby more and more interesting and i can t wait to see the next chapter.(i want to say sorry for my writting,but i can only write a little in english)

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